Ah... sorry... there I go again with my tendency to look down on my own generation...
I'm used to it already, so EVERYTHING'S ALL GOOD, OKAY?
Furthermore, mixing such an elegant word as sumire with a common word like sanae is like taking expensive fatty tuna and rolling it up in Indica rice...In haikus violets are associated with spring, but rice seedlings are associated with summer. Stacking seasonal words, conflicting ones no less, makes no damn sense.
Sumire = violet (the flower), sanae = rice seedling.The haiku itself was really stupid-sounding too.Today is Haiku Day, so I thought I'd try making up a haiku.Huh? What's this all of a sudden?Sumireko and /
Her best friend in the whole world /
Sanae are here