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I can't tell who is the boss here. I am guessing it's Abby, but that would make Kiara the protagonist...

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@Paracite
Any particular reason you opted for "Shinkai fish burger" instead of "Abyssal fish burger"?

Also, while I can understand why you altered "having" into "eating" to parallel the commercial tag line, I think the wordplay works better using "having" instead, and you would be forgiven for tweaking the tag line for the sake of a better punch line. My two bits, anyway.

The delivery box in the next panel has 'Shinkai Burger' written on it, so it's the company name, rather than a burger made from abyssopelagic fish.

I.e. A fish burger from 'Shinkai Burger' and not a 'shinkai burger'.

I didn't change it to eating, I had 'having' originally for the very reason of the joke working better - it was changed by someone else to match the ad (which I have no idea if there's a similar one in Japan). As the joke is based on having the same line twice, it has to be identical regardless of how it's worded .

AKSN74 said:

I think "Diver Eats" should named "UboatEats" lol

better tell IDO

A bit weird that this is technically more positive than in canon where byakuren wanted to punish mystia for being a bad influence towards kyouko.