Mmm... well, basically it's got this really great feel to it, but......hmmm....'s kinda how it feels to me.If you weren't, what'd be the point in asking you to look at it?I guess so. Huh, I see.Who's going to write the rest of this?I just think it'd be more balanced that way.Yeah....was I a little too hard on you?Oh yeah? I figured you'd think that too, Ogiue.Mmm... but, personally...How is it?See this part here? I think it'd be better off in the second half.I said it's fine!Don't you think it'd be better if you wrote the rest of this...? I mean, it's full-on yuri *g*Yeah?I wasn't too sure about that part myself, anyway.Uhh... Shigeta, right?