I'm taking it as a shot by drsunshine at Shinoasa, or at the doujinshi itself, so...
I don't understand the Shinoasa hate, or maybe it's just hate for that doujinshi. They don't care for it in general? Did the artist commit a sin for doing something that wasn't cute and fluffy as usual? Or is it because it's an erotic work, but fails at being arousing?
Meh. It's not like George Lucas and his revisions of his previous work. I can't see how it invalidates The artist can do whatever he or she wants; your approval isn't required.
Romantic softcore yuri fanfiction gets under this guy's skin? How does this guy function on the internet? Heaven help him if he stumbles unto any of that guro, rape or futanari stuff.