I'm still not very sure that I get the meaning of Akebono's line in third frame right. Someone please check it.
Considering the second frame's line, I would think she's telling Asashio to keep a mental image of the combat scenario as she shoots as opposed to standard target practice shooting.
I'm going ahead. Do your equipment maintenance properly too, you hear?Few days laterHah! I'm sorry!Seems like she got rubbed on that girl again.Ah, yes. Thank you for your hard work. Even though we have waited for it to be late to come see her.You are not doing battles alone. Think about your ally ships' positions too! Yes!Yes.Hya~That's wrong! How many times do I have to repeat it until you get it?Don't just fire away randomly. Keep the image of your target firmly in mind when you shoot!