If only the artist doesn't change the pupil shape, this would be the prettiest Alpaca Suri art in Danbooru.
Hmm? This only seems slightly more tareme than most, and the actual pupil itself doesn't seem to be unusual, other than amount detail in the "reflections".
I see nothing wrong with it. It makes her pretty (and comfy)
Uh. Alpaca's pupils are supposed to be like goat's. The artist took away what the only thing aside from the ears that makes her a_little_bit beastly, deviating from the original character. That's a minus for me.