There's no such thing as "enough eye-related puns". Anyway, the "I felt her body heat wane away with my own hands" line gave me this funny tingly feeling, I might need to re-watch some of the MSMM eps... or at least listen to the OST for a bit.
hooray i'm good at writing non-literal translations~
And yes, this doujin and a few others inspired me to check out the prettier Blu-ray episodes.
I've witnessed things I never wanted to see.I felt her body heat wane away with my own hands.I don't want to look.I don't want to look.I... don't want to look anymore!Over...And over again...I've heard that voice I never wanted to hear...