Their translations are mostly correct, although they took some liberties with some of the phrases to make the translation smoother to read, but kept the context intact. 눈깔사탕 두알로 만들어 뽀린다? which is presumed to be 눈깔사탕 두알로 만들어 버린다? which means (or else) I'll turn you into two hard round candy! (Eyeballs came from 눈깔, 눈깔사탕 means big hard round candy and sometimes called 눈깔사탕 because of its shape and size) With that being said though, it'd be absurd to make the whole of Architect two hard round candy unless it's huge, so one could interpret it as "I will make candies out of your eyeballs!" 3제대보단 월급이 많다 also means "Has a higher salary than the 3rd Echelon"
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Was it the "Miraculous escape show" using the red goliath costume??Very CuteBarkBarkHmphSob... I want to see my Gager...sobsobI'm a boss...But...Before I rip your eyeballs out and eat them like it's candy!You better let me down right now...No, why don't you come and live with me?Do you want this big sis to help get you home?Are you lost?Kyaa~~
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You're so cute!!And Gager begged me to call her later...Gosh, I'm so busy~Gains more resources than entire echelon in logistics.Huh?Whew~ What's the next place again?